Attempting to do something a little different, this week. A bit whimsical, if you will. I am working on several fictional short stories. Most of the WIP’s have a deadline sometime this month. Yes, I am insane, but that is completely beside the point.
I decided to share a bit of one of them. Fair warning: this is m/m romance. I stopped before I got the the really naughty bits b/c why would anyone need to read it when it’s done, otherwise. This is a work in progress, in this case, its currently being edited. I hope y’all enjoy. OH! and remember, I’m a complete feed-back slut, so please comment. ConCrit is always appreciated. If you love it, or if you hate it, let me know, as long as you’re willing to tell me why. đ
A disclaimer: this is a work of original fiction. Any similarities to actual persons living or dead is purely coincidental.
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If he was looking for atmosphere, heâd certainly picked the wrong joint, but as luck would have it, Chris was looking for nothing more than a cold beer, and the neon signs in the window of Auggieâs pub proclaimed that they had several varieties. The general lack of cars in the parking lot almost guaranteed that heâd be able to drink, and think, pretty much all by his lonesome, and he was relieved. It had been a brutal day, what with the long drive from St. Louis, to Lyneville, MO, and then the funeral. It was beginning to wear on even his perpetual good humor. He walked through the door, and stopped, briefly, to let his eyes adjust to the light (or lack, thereof), noting that he appeared to be one of only two customers, this particular Saturday. Of course, it was still fairly early.
Not wanting to appear unfriendly, he sat next to the only other warm body on that side of the bar, and gave his order to the bartender, who was attempting to appear busy, polishing beer mugs. Taking a deep pull off his long-neck, he savored the bitter tang of hops and barley, and sighed with obvious pleasure, happy to just be, for a time.
Out of the corner of his eye, he studied his ad hoc companion, dressed to the nines in a black western-style shirt and Wrangler jeans, Stetson pulled down low over his eyes, as he nursed his own beer. Clearing his throat, Chris put the bottle to his lips again, and spoke, before taking another long swallow, âNice night.â
The cowboy snorted derisively, not bothering to grace him with so much as a glance. His voice, when he spoke, was deep, rich, like chocolate, with a hint of a Texas drawl, âYeah. Right.â The stranger motioned the bartender for another beer, and continued to stare pointedly at a spot on the bar, apparently lost in thought.
He tried, once again, to make conversation, because Uncle Harry would have been rolling in his newly-occupied grave, if he hadnât, âSo….uh, Iâm not really from around here. I was kind of wondering…â
The stranger turned to him, in irritation, and cut him off, cold, âMister, my give-a-damn shattered a week ago. I donât mean to be rude, but I ainât lookinâ for conversation. I just wannaâ have a beer, or six, and forget today ever happened.â
Chris swallowed, nervously, and nodded in understanding, âYeah…I, uh, I got it. Sorry.â
The cowboy sighed deeply, and pushed his hat back on his head, grinning ruefully, âNah, man, Iâm the one who should apologize. Itâs been a bitch of a day, but thatâs not your fault. Â Iâm Jesse, by the way.â He extended a hand, and Chris couldnât help but notice, as he shook it, that it was well calloused–hands that were used to hard work.
âChris. I…I was wondering whatâs there to do for entertainment, âround here? Iâm in town for a funeral, and looking for something to pass the time. â The last time heâd spent a summer with his uncle, entertainment of the grown-up variety had been the farthest thing from his mind. Fishing, bike riding, the occasional horseback ride had been high on his list of priorities. Now, time and distance had dulled his memory to what the small town had to offer.
Jesse gave him a speculative look, studying him just a bit longer than necessary, which made Chris just the tiniest bit curious about this cowboyâs game. Finally, Jesse offered a small shrug, âThis is about it, Iâm afraid.â He motioned to Chrisâs beer, âYou want another?â Not waiting for an answer, he signaled the bartender, who busied himself filling the order.
Chris cleared a sudden lump in his throat, âI, um, my uncle was buried today. âS why Iâm here, I had to stick around to talk to his lawyer, tomorrow, about some stuff.â
He held up his beer, âTo your uncle. May he rest in peace.â The two men clinked the necks of their beer-bottles together, and took a deep swallow, as Jesse wondered absently whether or not he knew the kidâs uncle. Heâd have to ask, later, if it didnât come up.
Chris was amazed at how easily the conversation flowed between them, in the quiet dimness of the small bar. They made small-talk, about the weather, life, whatnot, which was fine, because he found himself drifting off into Jesseâs turquoise eyes, losing track of the conversation rather easily, whenever theyâd glance his way. Somehow reasoning that applying more beer would do wonders for his focus, he ordered another round for them both. Such a bad idea, the voice of reason warned, just before he bound and gagged reason, and pitched it into the corner.
His imagination may have been playing tricks on him, with an occasional flirtatious look, but there was no mistaking the warm press of the cowboyâs thigh against his, and when that subtlety failed to get a response, a kick against the sole of his own boot. When he looked up, a question in his eyes, Jesseâs face held that a note of semi-amusement,  as he peered out from under the brim of his hat, his tone coy, âYou tryinâ to get me drunk?â
Chris felt the corners of his mouth tug upward, in an answering grin, âThat kindaâ depends–Is it working?â
âWell,â long, slender fingers played absently with the label on the bottle, âthat kindaâ depends on what you had in mind.â
Chris searched the cowboyâs face for some indication that his words were intended to sound like a come-on, and wasnât the least disappointed to find that same teasing smile. Chris shook himself, and returned Jesseâs grin, âYou know, I was just thinking, you know, about my uncle. I hadnât seen him in years. Life kind of got in the way. But I remember him being so exuberant, and happy, and just…over the top. I kind of think heâd approve of this, you know, sitting in a bar, drinking a beer, finding some way to celebrate life. You know what I mean?â
Jesse raised one eyebrow, a snort of laughter escaping, âSeriously? ‘Some way to celebrate life?’ Thatâs the line youâre going with? Why donât you go freshen up, and see if you can think up something a little more original. Then weâll see.â Chris excused himself, confused. Line? What line? He was trying to make simple conversation, attempting to cover up the fact that heâd love to do the tall drink of water seven ways from Sunday, and Jesse had somehow seen right through it? Was he really that transparent? Calling himself eleven different kinds of idiot, for even entertaining thoughts of taking the cowboy back to his motel room, he splashed cool water on his flushed cheeks. Reason had somhow slipped itâs bonds, and was screaming at him BAD IDEA! Really bad! This will NOT end well.
He was washing his hands, when he heard the door open, and shut, and the unmistakable snick of the lock being turned. He glanced up in the mirror, and saw Jesse, standing there, back pressed against the door, gazing at him. Chris shot him a questioning look, in the mirror. A lazy grin spread across Jesse’s handsome face, âI decided to give you the benefit of the doubt. Youâre so hot, probably havenât needed much practice at pick-up linesâwhich you really suck at, by the way.â
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That’s it! It’s all you get. Let me know what you think.